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Watch.

Wait.

Act.

You watch the monster grow within him.
You watch it consume him.
You watch him become something he fears.
You watch him fight.

You wait for him to talk.
You wait for his cry of desperation.
You wait for him to accept your offer for assistance.
You wait for him to come round.

You've acted,
Acted out your story for him,
You've acted out of desperation.

But still he struggles,
He fights himself,
He wants to talk but wont.
You pray he comes round.

You watch.
You wait.
You've acted.
All you can do is wait some more
©2007-2010 ~ezzen16
:iconezzen16:

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YOU MUST READ THIS!

people fight themselves, they struggle with deep dark secrets. they want to spill them but they fear rejection, solitude and hate tattooed on your knuckles.
wat they dont realise is that they already are in solitude. they slowly push all those away that care.
my brother is 11, he has my name written across his knuckles like you have the words love and hate.
i leave my family to look for a life of my own next year, i fear for him and what he will do, how he will cope.

this is just the words of a lonely concerned sister trying to get through to her brother who feels he must live in solitude cos no one cares

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:iconijustwannabeme:
Thats really beautiful, and its true...:(

When you can turn to look for someone else, solitude turns into hate...

But theres always some hope. :) Keep in touch, check in, and soon he will find the strength within himself to break free. The ones who cannot care are the foolish ones. Hope you both will be alright!

:hug:

--
I'll swallow up all of you
Like a big bottle of big, big pills.
You're the one that I should never take
But I can't sleep until I devour you.
I can't sleep until I devour you. ~ Devour, Marilyn Manson. <3
:iconezzen16:
yeah he's a bit rough atm but hopefully he will stop bein so goddamn stubborn adn come round.
thanx 4 the fav btw

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Luv ya, take care
ERin
:iconijustwannabeme:
No problem. :)

--
I'll swallow up all of you
Like a big bottle of big, big pills.
You're the one that I should never take
But I can't sleep until I devour you.
I can't sleep until I devour you. ~ Devour, Marilyn Manson. <3

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